Comments : Unexplained

  • 11 years ago

    by *emmax*

    That's why i can't forget you
    please come at least in my
    dreams..

    I love this line,come at least in my dreams,that's a serious punchline right there!

    It depicts the true desperation of a heart that still longs for lost love...

  • 11 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    I absolutely love love love this poem. I'm not gonna lie; when I saw it, I didn't think it was gonna draw me in because it was so short, but from the moment I read the first line, I was completely captivated by the sadness before I finished reading it. Great job. 5/5.