I loved this! The silence someone gives u is worse than anything. I liked how u described that feeling especially with someone u love. Nice write. Loved it! :)

This was really neat. Like your striving to hear words from someone you care. Longing to hear anything. Just the sound of their voice soothes. Nice job. By the way you misspelt "you thinking". Needs to be "you're thinking" :)

This was really neat. Like your striving to hear words from someone you care. Longing to hear anything. Just the sound of their voice soothes. Nice job. By the way you misspelt "you thinking". Needs to be "you're thinking" :)

Since, I-myself is at a point in a relationship with one who your poem completely describes....I love the choice of words.
Very well written.

(: 5/5

I liked the way you evoked your feelings, very nice write 5/5. :)

Want my advice? Run for your life if you have a man like this. I have been married to one such as this for nearly 25 years and he NEVER changed..always uses silence as an instrument to torment me.

well done,

5/5 Ingrid