Comments : Still falling...

  • 11 years ago

    by Janis

    Sad, short but powerful piece. Like how well you did show your emotions there, good job keep it up.

    P.S.Take care there and cheer up a bit will be okay ^^

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Well done keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Lovely yet sad. I feel like that would be a perfect poem to turn into a song, like with the way the words flow. Just a thought (: