Loving someone is such a drug

every smile to throw at you is like a needle in your arm that gives you that warm feeling deep inside of you

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Oh I love this one, you are definitely an awesome poet with great skills!!!

I love guitars, I've always wanted to learn that as well as drums. I agree that love is a drug and it can completely take us over emotionally and physically.

Awesome write

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Wow, i think you actually have a talent.
I loved it :)

Love is a drug. This you have perfectly ascertained.

Again, you're imagery is flawless. It's as if the reader is there, is you; thinking these thoughts, seeing him play... you describe the scene so well.

I loved how in the last few stanzas you chose to limit your syllables and it has such impact! Well done!

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Nice poem but it need a pop to it or more flavor something