This is just an amazing piece. It is touching, it really is.
Awesome job.

Syrup......sigh....baby bird will fly again higher than before *HUGS :-) xx

What a moving poem...just breathtakingly beautiful, sad and touching.

Loved it...

I liked this, thought you described the emotion well in your middle stanza :

The evening of darkness
consumes your mind
with thoughts of burning beds
and hopeless agony

- your words create a powerful image and a sense of what the pain is like.

Very touching.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

So sad but beautiful. I love the image of birds flying free, hate to see anything broken.

Beautiful poem hun,

x