An interesting write, I don't read much dark poetry i'm more the opposite. But I could feel the emotion in this poem and i can relate to;

'I feel cut off and shut out
I'm always trying to figure you out'

and

'I also just want you to be you
and just stop pretending'

these stanza's are my favorite in this poem, sometimes its difficult trying to figure someone out and you don't know what has mad them upset, thus you try cheering them up :]......the second one i don't like people acting fake or lying to you instead you just want them to be forward and be honest.

I just want to say finally there is a typo, Straight not 'stright'

5/5