She sold her soul,
darkness over toke her,
she weeped in the dark,
he wondered what to do with her.
After all she had nowhere to go,
his affection had allways been a show.
He grabbed a knife,
and cut her heart,
ohh, god...
awesome poem......

This is a great piece with real meaning! I thought that the flow was a bit off but it is really good keep it up

Wow... this took an interesting turn. Good piece. I like the style and voice but i have to agree the flow was off.

Wow your good but I agree with my dreamer the flow is off. But your really freaking good!!!

The day the angle died was a read with flow. It's the
first one I read, I got to tell ya, except for the few times
the flow dipped. . It had me all the same. Nice piece. .