Comments : Forbidden Love

  • 13 years ago

    by Omar

    Wow, just an amazing poem. I can picture everthing happening.
    Great job, love it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    I love this,beautifuly writen

  • 13 years ago

    by Alyssa Rianne

    Your welcome

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I dnt knw is it a love or an explicit..
    Bt ur words r eye catching..
    I loved dis poem..gud work

    • 13 years ago

      by Owner of an Untamed Heart

      Oh, I asked if it were explicit, and because it didn't explain extreme raunchiness, it was just sensual. So, ta da !

  • 12 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Love it