I like this poem, I am not too fond to the repetition of I'm the season at the beginning.. I did like the mentioning of autumn, winter... Etc.
But when I was reading, the repetition at the beginning was over used at least to me.. After that I have no other thing to critique. I like it.

Loved this one and the idea of it, very unique. For me, it was almost like two poems in one. I think the beginning of this poem would actually do well on it's own. And the remaining stanza's be formed into a seperate poem.

I loved loved this stanza :
Everything is momentary
a photograph soon to fade
and everything is blacked now
you are just a different shade

- my favourite, it really stands out for me, flows great and I just really realte to it.

Good job on this one, you done well.