Aww. I could relate to this. It shows how much you are longing for someone who obviously means a lot to you.

nice work

I thought the last line sounded a bit strange then I realized it was a senryu.

Yeah, we might wish to spend more time with someone and that someone spends more time with something else.. I like how you want to be that pen, it's like you want that someone to think of you as the pen so may be that someone would spend the same time but this time with you.

I really adore this senryu!

When we long to be with someone, it's one of the worst feelings ever. I really like how you used the pen - fantastic!

<3

Oh I love this!!!

Do you feel that you have lost inspiration and feel that the pen should be with you!

I love what you've done here, but I will say that with every poem you write, I believe that your pen is with you because all your poems are amazing!

x

Great write, Meme. I love this :)

Sigh.....just wonderful i can only echo what the.guys have said above^^^^^ its wonderful x