Awesome poem,

when I was reading it, I thought it sounded like a song.

Thank u so much..dear

Exotic and beautiful!

I collected stars to make you a necklace.
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Oh how poetic was that line. This piece is truly beautiful. Loved the words and romantic feel to the whole entire piece!

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Sweet

I was wondering when i read the title of the poem,that the language used here is somewhat related to my neighboring country...n yes it was!!
the poem is really sweet!!
i understood the poem without reading the note at last..for it is familiar to me..n you've added that,so AT has of course understood the whole of it.

Wanted to know,when did u learn the language??n ur idea in using it together with english??
but anywys,that was rather sweettt.
^_^

I love how the lines written in punjab add to the poem rather than break the flow

great job as usual