Comments : Questionnaire

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Sometimes we hide from some things and deny them, even to ourselves. But It's great to be free..
    So much said in so little words. I love this piece, Karla :)

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Beauty ,i loved ..especialy 1st two lines..

  • 11 years ago

    by Garnet

    This is an interesting poem, Karla. I am quite curious about the title though...did you title it questionnaire because you want people to be curious about you? Or do you want it to be so that you do not have to answer the questions? I'm probably not right at all, am I?

    I am sure that this poem has a meaning that I don't quite understand. I assume that you are being judged for something, so you want to 'be stripped bare' so that the truth is finally known...love it, Karla. You are talented.

  • 11 years ago

    by mandy

    A rich and pure poem, wonderfully written. 5/5/

    mandy :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    I feel that in this piece the veil represents your thoughts, feelings and emotions. Your beliefs and morals. When you express that you want to cover the universe with your veil I'd imagine it would be you wanting to express your beliefs and thoughts to the world, the freedom to say what you want without remifications.

    I love this piece, it really has made me think. Who knows it may not be exactly what I thought but I love what I have gotten from this piece.

    Gorgeous!

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Awesome piece Karla. Imagery fantastic with a meaning deeper than I can put my finger on right now.

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    What is it about you?

    FLAWLESSNESS

  • 11 years ago

    by BLBrown

    To me, this is almost about accepting one's truth. We all lie to ourselves about who we are, what we want, etc.. It is a natural human condition to not be able to see clear through to our very souls until achieving enlightenment.

    I enjoyed this because it made me stop and think...always a sign of a good poem. What truth lies before me that I do not recognize? It is hard to live with truth.

    Did I get this right? Loved the poem and am enjoying this group!