Comments : The real me

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This sounds like being scared of life overall.
    There is nothing wrong with that. All we can do is give it our best and try to do right in life. We have to endure pain, we make mistakes, we put our trust in the wrong people, we make bad choices, all that is part
    of life. We learn lessons from it.Never give
    up on yourself, you are only granted one
    life and it is the most precious there is.
    excellent written

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    GASPS!!!!!!!!

    HOLY ******!!!!!

    I gotta say Baby R i am soooo in awe of this write, you've probably gathered im a sucker for rhyming but i found this to be nothing short of blisfully wonderful!

    The meaning of the piece is not lost on me and i hope you are ok, my inbox is always open.

    But i found the repetition and the flow in this piece just epic!! Seriously one of my favourite rhyming pieces ever!! going straight into my favourites and staying there so i Can read it and wish i wrote it lol.

    Just got yourself a new fan :-)

    Amazing write xx