This poem grabs deep at the heart... and is very touching... very creative angle you took with this piece Baby R... very nice!

This one really does get to your heart. I'm very tired so this might be short haha. Couple of things. I loved first of all the simplisty of the whole poem. At least the story of it. But the character of the Cyclops is very sad. I think that's how you see yourself as a monster or something lesser than a person. The whole world seems to be after you and there is nothing you can do. When you start to have doubt in yourself that's when we see ourselves as a monster. I loved here how you seem to have a softer side as well. The teddy bear brings out the little girl in you. I can see the teddy bear being from someone special. That's why you treasure it so much. Anyway I loved the message altogether because it is very strong yet sad. Well done.