Comments : Bedlam (the love that dies)

  • 11 years ago

    by Krysten

    Beautiful, great use of words. Interesting, like your other poems and very good. Although i wonder ...the line after the first stanza.. is it supposed to run together as one word??? 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Unrequited

    It is. An unusual style, I know. But I am sometimes heavily influenced by e.e. Cummings, if you know his work.
    Thank you. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Unrequited

    It is. An unusual style, I know. But I am sometimes heavily influenced by e.e. Cummings, if you know his work.
    Thank you. :)