This is great and has such emotion in it. One thing though that may just help you do you look through your poems? its just there is at least one word I can guess thats ment to be a diff word. the line says 'I with I could turn back time'.

omg wow! i am soo sorry for ur bf, it must be hard for him to have to go thru that pain, give him my deepest sympathys xoxo

im so sorry =( trgic but yet well written i loved this one =) oh well i loved all ur poems =) gave it a 5 :) ciao gurl, hope u pass by mine =)

WONDERFUL poem..

Wow amazing poem Dani, and so sad! Im so sorry for your boyfriend, hes lucky to have you tho to help him get through his guilt and pain xxx

That was a really great poem. It was so touching.

Thats so sad!!!!! omg... !

[good poem!!]

That poem was exellently written, and I'm sorry to hear that it was true. However, (and I feel stupid asking this) what happened to the little brother? I can use my imagination, but I'm just wondering what actually happened to him. Very sad and beautiful poem.