Comments : Pine Cones, Acorns and Us

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Loooooove writing with you Sryup!!!!!!

    I shall raise a beer to us for this one :-)))

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is an AMAZING piece, I love how you wtwo wrote this. It flowed perfectly, and as I read it I feel the strong friendship between you ywo.
    Awesome job:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    I... I.... I....... I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT @_@!!!!

    The way you described the diferences and the similarities, the wordings, the flow.. Oh god this whole thing is amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing <3

    You both ROCK :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well done both of you, you make collabs look so easy to do.

    This is so beautiful, I truly believe in every word you are both expressing here. It is a beautiful message of a strong friendship. Love the use of pine cones and acorn, so unique.

    Good work <3 x

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    Ok...I'm not a fan of collabs but....I liked your title enough for me to come in and read..you both fooled me because if collab had been in the title I wouldn't have visited haha!!! But...now that I'm here *cough*

    Different but same, you can see
    pine cones, acorns falling from trees
    Lost in nature, all of our days
    Blessed our we and our silly ways

    ^^^

    Blessed *are*

    You write funny, and I do too
    Speech is garbled, I have no clue
    I drive on the wrong road,
    when seen from your side.

    We each have a birthday,
    and love to celebrate.
    Have dreams of happiness,
    and fear it's too late.

    Like acorns and pine cones,
    the same are we.
    Different but the same,
    just divided by sea.

    ^^^

    third and forth line you use the word same so..I don't know...universal twins are we....something like that perhaps?

    Origins, style, very unique
    Nature and love is all we speak
    Thoughts colliding within a maze
    Blessed our we and our silly ways

    again....our should be are.

    Enjoyed it...

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    *Don't know why but...double post?