Comments : Bleeding

  • 11 years ago

    by Xionide

    "You can tell alot about a soul from how it bleeds.

    More from the way it shares the distress; "

    oooh those lines are effective! strong start honey and great flow too, you do have a way with expressing dark thoughts, even if this an old poem by you. you should upload more of your recent stuff. love you xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is deep and powerful, nobody understands the pain we all endure
    5/5