Comments : What Happened?

  • 11 years ago

    by Aaron

    It was good. Personally, I wouldn't have so many question marks maybe commas instead and then a question mark on the last stanza of each line, but that's just me.
    Your poem did touch on feelings of a lost friendship that is clear, but the way it is...I don't know, maybe it could use some revision. You're still young so you'll get better, with that said your poem was not bad 4/5. Keep at it.