I'll be honest and say this is my favorite from our collabs

And I will be even more honest and say YES IT IS!

This poem has a very masculine and powerful part and a soft and feminine one... Ususally the poem is written in such a way that you cannot really telll who wrote what, but this turned out really great!

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Oh my Goood...

what a piece!!!

freaking awesome.
freaking stunning!!! I used all my votes :/

I just like the rhythm.... it's so neat!

No matter how strong we stand, our hearts still bow
But I continue to smile because you showed me how
So let me loosen the knots and set you free
Lets pretend that you're not you and I'm not me

awesome... meaning behind your words...

Wow!!! I'm speechless.... I am in love with this poem!!! First of all, what a beautiful and lovely collaboration!! You both should collaborate more, I am so impressed and proud of both of you!! Hats off to both of you for writing a rhyming poem as well! :)

I love so many things about this poem... and I love the meaning..

This is one of my favorite lines: "Darling, I, in the loose knots of a weak rope"

I must say I loved the last two stanzas... they really touched me and moved me!

"So let me loosen the knots and set you free
Lets pretend that you're not you and I'm not me"

^^ Beautifulllll!!!

Amazing collaboration!!! Definitely deserves a nomination <3