WOW! Again, this piece shows such inner strength.

What you seem to be saying is, you won't give up. They can do all sorts of cruel things to hurt you, but you won't let them destroy your soul.

I particularly like your layout of this piece. It provides the poem strength also.

Also, your use of the capital for 'Your' - it seems to create importance for this particular word; draws the reader to its bold use - the word itself seems to symbolise that you are this person's possession, they control you, but by the use of this capital, somehow you defy them. I don't know, that's just how I feel.

One minor mistake;
'scetch' should be 'sketch'

I really like this piece. It's probably my favourite of yours. I hope you write more.

Take care.