Comments : Escape

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    I like the self reflections ebbing throughout this poem. It creates this direct link to the way you think and provides us with a segment of an experience. Love is painful and like everything life gives us it's a learning journey to discovery whether it be yourself or others.

    I found the use of rhetorical questions very effective as it captures and drags the reader on your journey.
    I found the last sentence very powerful and a great way to end this poem!!!

    Keep it up!
    5/5