Comments : My Moths Within

  • 11 years ago

    by Xionide

    "Moths that fly inside my heart,
    My used heart, so numb and cold.
    These moths they savour the emptiness,
    The bareness that is just my heart-shaped mould."

    to hear you speak like this is very hurtful baby, but at least now that we have each other you have the love you always wanted and that you deserve. I will never fail you, I hope you know that. onto subject,this is a very powerful stanza that does scream sadness baby.

    "
    These moths they look quite delicate,
    Quite beautiful and innocent.
    But they don't care for making my heart,
    A warm place of sentiment.

    They can keep so still while I'm numb,
    Then when I feel a glimpse of light,
    They start their flying dance,
    Keeping my heart away from what's bright. "

    those stanzas are so sad, its like you were so empty no matter what you did or how you felt it just wasnt enough, like you didnt have what you were looking for. now thats changed, I will make your future the best I can manage sweetheart, I promise.

    "With fear and anxiety controlling,
    But they are my moths now.
    The only thing I have within my chest,
    Maybe I will love just these somehow."

    This stanza is heartbreaking to read you once felt this way, its like its saying that you just settled for the heartache and misery, never again darling, i will change things for the better like i already have, but more. i love you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx