Comments : Tease

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    You dirty rotten skank, I love you :)

    I can't comment on this piece because it will yell at me for being inappropriate, but just know I LOVE THIS

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Tease?

    The title fits the content of the poem. Lol
    I can't say anything else. Good write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Holy Moly

    This was great, I don't know what else to say, being such an innocent lad all I can ask is why your chap carries fruit around in his pocket? ; - )

    There is great tension in this, I can almost feel the poor mans excitement.

    great write.