Together you always write the best poetry...
I am not able to comment properly on this piece right now...
I will try and get back to it tomorrow...
But I love it

x

Sigh what did I think..

You are two precious people, obviously I'd be blown away by the outcome, this poem is so beautiful and asks to be experienced and not just read.

I want to see many many many more collabs, I can't do anything, but sigh and melt really. :)

Ohhh Wow guys, really.

It really flowed so well, every stanza joined well with the last and continued into the next. I don't know why but I had images of a couple in Paris with romantic dinners etc. It just felt like a poem about a movie scene in your love films etc.

It was beautifully written with such amazing choices of words. I also loved the ending as a line on its own, this would make a good quote seperate from the poem. I felt this line kind of summed up your poem and the emotion of happiness, it describes what true love should be, should be happy every second and you felt in this poem it was.

Brilliant you two, just loved it. xx

Excellent job guys. Reminds me of an
od movie, Dancing in the rain"
I can smell love in the air

I really love this line: "At the moment when we kiss tentatively, the Earth
falls away and we are left balancing -
among the stars reflecting in our eyes."
4/5!

Your word choices are impeccable.....You are indeed very talented my friend......Whisk