I like the way you have incorporated many countries, biblical features and issues viewed today in one poem!
I like how you use more unique wording displaying that you have a very wide vocabulary!

I found this very powerful...
"it's not war its murder of words"
It carries so much meaning that one cannot begin to start describing!
people often take for granted how harmful words can be in actual fact it can be war.

You are very good at painting an image of the poem to the reader!
thanks for sharing your great talent!

5.5 from me

It was an enjoyable read. I liked the use of different words showing your wide vocabulary. The words easily created an image that flowed freely within my mind as I read. And I like how you ended it with a question about the great debate. Keep it up.