Comments : Decay

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Beautifully constructed!
    Hope you win!
    5.5 from me!

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree with beautifully constructed comment. Simplicity is an excellent technique.

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Such beauty within this poem. Describing the slow process of withering leaves/petals. Bon Travail! :} ..