Comments : Braves machen (acrostic)

  • 11 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    I've got to applaud you here, I have tried Acrostic poems before and although I have thrown bits of it in other poems, it is really hard for me to do one from beginning to end. I enjoyed this, to branch off a letter and have play on words that go along with the word or words you are writing about can sometimes be tough. You did a remarkable job for your first one and I'd say keep them coming if it felt right.

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nicely done. These can be tough, it's easy to find the words beginning with the specified letter but no so easy to have it all make sense..
    TJ

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    This is great Krysten, I love the irony with the title,

    then you use words such as 'bound' and 'command' and 'please you'

    As an acrostic it worked well because it flows well, no words seem forced to fit in with the title.

    good job.