Comments : To Give Up

  • 13 years ago

    by Marvellous

    The worst, is best on the wrong side. Every wheat ferments, for good brew. Against all odds, victory abounds. Untill you give up, you CAN win!

  • 13 years ago

    by San voix Amant

    Great write, such emotion within this piece and so much pain and sadness pouring out through every word.. Keep your head held high, you can get over this challenge.
    5/5