It is a fear for not being able to look into the eyes of your beloved, there are many reasons, I guess. I hope she hears you...

I just so love this poem because of the voices it made in my head. It went so smooth, and I can liken it to a song chorus; yes, it can be turned into a song!

There is a small mistake: losing.. instead of.. lossing ....

And I don't know if 'I hope this you hear' is grammatically correct, but oh well.... you need to keep the rhymes, so it's still great :)

@Everlasting and Abed thank n for the mistakes i will rectify

This sounds like a Chorus of a very sad song,
and it sounds beautiful
as for not being able to look @ your loved ones eye, I believe it shows that you aren't proud of what you've accomplished!
5/5

This is sad when you want to be around that person but you can't it tear's you up inside sad & heartfelt piece p&l midnight sky

This is pretty powerful to my soul for I think my soul would say something similar to this work of art :)

What a beautiful but sad piece that speaks volume of the pain that follows a broken heart. Very touching indeed. An enjoyable read.