nice poem =) i can relate, every lil inch of ur poem =) gave it a 5 =) hope u can pass by mine =) ciao

WOW..I LOVE this poem!! i think you did a great job!! keep it up!!
i wish ya the very best!!!
luv elizabeth.

Aw, I feel like I was watching a movie scene during that, very good, i can feel your pain and i love how you ended the poem..with a heart that'll never die, aw so true well done hun take care

I loved this poem. I can relate to it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Wow. Speechless. I can relate.

Very nice... i loved this poem... so many can relate to it... very well written... nice job...

sammie

Thank you for being so honest in your writing i kind of teared up a bit cause of those i have lost to drugs and alchol

That is such and awesome poem. I love it so much!! Great Job!:)