Errors:
Correct 'god' to 'God' and very few abbreviations into its formal context.

This is pleasantly sad. You love and adore this subect but seems fate will trade you both to diverse paths. You conveyed the feelings felt knowing life has to move on without this person. Someone who has played an integral part in your. You've accepted and will move on but just a moment to declare your emotions, is what you showcased here.

Love is simply intoxicating with its sweet, sour and bitter highlights. Loosing a love one is harder than expected. A fusion of emotions tangled to your life, turning your happiness into a momentarily echo of despair that speaks of hope. Lovely piece, keep it up!