That felt sore. The worst thing in life is being suppressed, and what worse is being behind bars with no freedom.

I like how the prison is the central idea. Great job, Thomas!

Our own body is the worst prison that one can be at..

For instace, When someone can't move at all due to paralysis or overweight. ( there might be other reasons) but It must a be torture not being able to control our movements and do things on our own.

5/5

This poem tells so much truth about the entrapments and isolations of the human brain. The ideology that we are unable to to liberate our selves from our own bodies is emotionally distressing as we tend to see ourselves as 'free creatures'.

Wow, you can feel the hurt in this poem, the frustration and the torment... geeez, what a life to live :/ You express the feelings of being imprisoned very well and then at the end you drop the bomb, "what is a man to do when the prison walls that hold you is your body itself?"

Again, wow. This was very nice, I also read the article and that is truly sad. On a more positive note, it should help to make everyone who is physically healthy appreciate their life and not take such simple, yet very important things for granted. Great job here :)