This piece left me wondering...

Thank you for the translation at the end, I'm still trying to make sense of the images in my head... For some odd reason, I thought of a vampire, but it's not about a vampire. It sounded to me like a willing sacrifies but is so dark. The thought of the angel devouring her and the pain yet pleasure that she felt...
It's a bit strange in my head well, it's well written and I need to read it more times to fully understand this piece. However at first read, it's awesome. I like the word choice and the dark tone. I also like the starting part, is it French?

Awesome, dark and very powerful.

great imagery throughout.

I have read it 3 times now, you are the master at story telling and setting a mood.

nominated

too good to ignore

This piece is Beautifully dark..... very rich in flavored words.... love it!!!

It's beautiful how you added that French touch.

I can imagine while reading this some abstract movie scenes about blasphemous love, or so...

A spectacular write, KArla <3

No one can blend pleasure and pain together where I feel like I actually enjoy it- like you. You are a teacher to all Karla. We learn thru you. Thank you for being here amongst us.
Always
Lostlove~

To write a poem that tells a story this well and descriptive would be so tough for me, so I truly admire your talent and how you can use words that are so poetic and dark and detailed, yet your story is so clear and so interesting I feel like its an intriguing novel I don't want to end.

I just love your talent!

Beautiful really good work :) keep it up

Beautiful really good work :) keep it up

Breathtaking, Karla..

Beautiful , I like poems that are really detailed

Awesome write :)

A very deserved win. Congratulations, my friend :D

I can see why this poem won Karla, the dark images, the tone, the vulnerability in the words is awesome.

I too thought of vampires. I had an image of those people out there who give their bodies to vampires to feed off, being a willing victim. The fact that they do it because they like it but still of course feel both pleasure and pain.

I could be way off of course but still this poem has me in awe.

x

Love it. Well worth its win. Its a very powerful piece that I will never grow tired of.