A very powerful poem... I could feel every sense of it.. so flawless.. and the words usage is just great.... flow is perfect...!!!
Submerge me in the ocean--
leave out the part where,
the salt comes from the eyes,
wounds shed from a secret place--

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what a verse.... wonderful!!!!!
Good work:)

I love the descriptions in this and I love the style. Excellent job. Stunning word choice, beautiful flow.