Thomas!?!?!?!?

What a creative angle you took within this nature poem... VERY NICE! I really love how you described an avalanche.... really creative and breathtaking!!

This is such a strange twist
hip hop rap intertwined with nature!

I will say that I like it, for you've tried something out of the ordinary and it worked out well, I love the imaginary!

keep hustling man!

Very descriptive you've been here. The poem flows fluently and your word choice was superb. Nature is so beautiful, yet can be so extremely violent and scary at times as well.. You express this well here, keep it up.!

I love the word "Avalanche" it has a ring to it :P

Perfect metaphors to describe how it all happens. You wrote it with such an ease that the flow of words just run naturally.

Well done!

This was veyr unique, loved the description of the title being the poem, but also the double meaning because this avalanche could be an emotion also, which is what it is like inside of us sometimes,

amazing write. well done.