Ole--- Mercy! You took my breath away... I love the raw emotion and in depth sadness and longing within this piece. I love the metaphors of the dog on the bench... wishing for that letter... very touching piece by you!

It's a cool poem, Ole. I like your tone in here.

This is beautiful words here, I love the ending of wanting to be the dog because it recieves more attention and love than you do.

Beautifully penned, well done.

Hi

Thanks for your lovely comments, sometimes a man can be horrible and demanding, I know, smiling

BR
Ole