Comments : Jimmy and Janis

  • 11 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    This reminds me of how parents pass down the traits of responsibility to their kids! to each his own method, and through this experience ! we grow up to love and appreciate the people who made us, what we are today!

    5/5, such a warm piece!

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Andrea, what do you do to me? You make me fall in love with a form of poetry I hate lol freaking amazing...See here is an example of rhymed poetry that is awesome. That is not cliche' , that uses big statements, that makes their poem intriguing. God I loved this...Loved "singing in the womb" hehe amazing..

    Totally agree with Ole, it just reminded me of legacies , stories, and advice that people pass down to their family before they day. Nicely done!!