I love it.......i hate to think of you feeling this way...and it makes me wanna squish you.....but as usual when you write from the heart like this you just captivate me completely......i gotta read this a few times but ill be back to comment properly x

I too hate to see you feel that way, but damn Chels this piece is so touching and soo deep and personal!

The metaphors you had just left me speechless, you mamanged to keep me coming for more. I read I think more than 10 times maybe, but it still feels so sad and heartbreaking in each and everytime.

Let it all out, god knows masterpieces come from real life moments!

xxx

Umm you seriously just made me cry.

I'm just going to express my heart here in this comment. You have poured out your feelings in such a way that the reader can feel your sadness and frustration... there are some poems that I read, that simply cant be broken down... this poem is one of them, it speaks for itself... and it connects to the reader... all I can say.... powerful piece Chelsey!

Wow this is fantastic. The emotions conveyed are so powerful I was able to stand in your shoes for a moment. I was able to hear your soul's "voice" reading this piece to me and watch your hands flow to write. I read this piece multiple times and with each time I did I only saw more of the place where you were coming from. At first I was truly speechless, hence the odd comment I am leaving now. Your words here really have touched me. I'm extremely glad I read this.

Magnificent Job.

Part of me wishes this poem was one done for a challenge and has no meaning to it, but I somehow feel that it is very much how you may feel right now and that saddens me.

I love this poem Chels,I like how you start off describing the scene you are in while beginning to write this and how we all sometimes pick up the pen and have no idea of what is going to follow in ink.

Quite frankly, I'm tired of checking my pulse to make sure
my blood still circulates forward, and not in reverse
like our relationship seems to be heading.
I'm here waiting, witnessing you damage the
present, while your focusing on our future.

- definatly my favourite part, I like how you used your blood flow to compare to how the realtionship is going, it is so unique and makes this point unforgettable while reading on.
Also the last part, I really liked because often so many people focus on the furture in the wrong way and in the mean time what they have is damaged and forgotton. It is sad to see.

Good work and I hope it helped to release it.

Stunning write chels... you were writing your mind, your emotions and so you couldnt title this one... you just captivate with your write dear... I mean it is drenched with emotions, your confusion towards your relation and such great flow... I could relate to it a lot:)
Great5/5 from me;)

There is a pattern within these lines
That within the words you make your
Reader look through your eyes and see the world from your rare view too,
Very descriptive of your emotions and I dont know If this comes naturally! Or being mature enough to acquire such an expertise in this field
This poem spoke itself out loud and was loaded with emotions and a harsh sense of certain realties
5/5 and well worthy of praise