Wow!!

I am truly humbled to read a piece like this. Not a lot of guys would write about that, so I salute you for doing so! Although you were seeking help but your words were strong, deep and straigh to the point.

T, you never fail to amaze me with your write and your rhymes.

Well done!

Sensitive well it is really good subject u wrote about
and you wrote with rhymes ( I personally don't like rhymes ) but you did a really good job there
it is true that it can be hard to be sensitive cause u will get hurt a lot just as you said you have to gather your defenses to keep harsh words u will get away

well done
keep writing =)

This is powerful bro
although I would love for you to change the 4th santanza a bit, For it took away a bit of this poem's essence, The rest of the lines are just beautiful
heads up

Nice work, good flow and ryhme and the subject was one to be admired and I felt your bravery to release these thoughts,

I liked your input of the big bad wolf and the straw house, it makes the imagery so clear to the many people who have known this story and read it in childhood.

Well done and I hope to read more from you.

Dude this is an awesome write :-)))

Being a sensitive guy is harder than what people think eh? I know that one well, a great man once told me ' to be a good man you must be caring and passionate but never weak' i have to say i think thats a good analogy. And thomas you are all these things even if you dont see it, the rest of us do :-)

5/5 all day long my friend :-)

A well written piece with. Important values

Here it is, d best part of ur poem.

So that these things don't stick
and infect my sanity
soil my fragile personality
reduce my visions clarity

Like a straw house
I can collapse..

Gud ,thomas..

My fav lines...
"Please help me strengthen
my very foundation

So I can survive the days
without everyones consolation"
A very true & honest poem...
Good piece!

Wow... I was blow away...by such blunt truth...i think it nice that your are senative...i dont see that alot..it refreashing:).....great poem:)