Haha T
I'm hungry after reading this
I love your imaginary, it shows that you can write a poem about anything in your mind
Even dinner

I honestly didn't read the title at 1st so to me it looked like it belonged in the dark section cause I thought you are torturing another being

Never the less
Another poem by you worthy of praise
Good job! And l5/5

Lol this was very clever, really dark and gory but in the end it is about cooking dinner, perhaps chicken?

nice work! very different.

Haha This is great. I love the imagery you've used. This poem seems a bit disturbing at first then once you realize it is actually about preparing dinner, you can't help but smile because it's a very cleaver and creative write.. I believe this is first poem of preparing dinner that I've read, good job, keep it up.

Thomas?!

What did you write? this is dark, well, this is dark. But really well described. I'm amazed. The title says Dinner so I was ready to read something about dinner and well, I did get that. And I like the fact that you posted this poem within the miscellaneous category because it is about dinner... haha well, it seems like my mind got twisted.. in a way. Because this poem doesn't specified if it's talking about a chicken or if a cannibal is the one who is narrating.. You see, the narrator in a story or poem doens't necessarily is the author. So when I read this poem, I thought that the narrator was a cannibal who was getting his dinner ready.

Though, since I didn't see this poem within the dark category, I thought...hmm okay, it is about a chicken or meat or something.. it can't be about what I was thinking. hehe..

regardless, the narrating worked well.

Well done,

LOL
"Afterwards I sacrifice you
to the Gods of consumption"
how did u come up with that =P
hmm well it is really......Dinner haha, I like how u made it look so dark like you were torturing someone as Rab said but it finally turns out to be just someone making dinner.
I love the poem and the way you made looking Dinner seem so evil.

Good work ( God of consumption ) you finished your meal haha
really good work 5\5 keep writing as good =)

This poem as just ok for me. It was easy to understand and the wording was good. But, I just didn't really get into it. It was a good length and the slow was good.

Gave it a 4/5

I love the gore... it was like watching a horror movie... I was thinking that you was some sick serial killer with someone strapped to a table and was cackling with laughter as you cut them up. Then, I got to the ending talking about "stuff and season you" and was like ewww... this is graphic... and then I remembered the title was "Dinner" ... and it connected, hahaha. It's really creative and definitely captures the reader in!