Such a moving write, lovely choice of words. The ending was superb! 5/5

mandy :)

Mohan, this is best i hv read so far frm u..
U r creating ur own style..gud job..and i agree wid mandy ..d ending is superb.

Purplerose, your critique on spelling is not all correct. The word "realized" is spelled correct in Mohan's poem. Realize is spelled with the letter "Z" not "S"

Other than that good critique and nice poem.