Beautifully sad Rebecca. You did well on Ingrids challenge. Be proud of this heartfelt piece! :)

Very well tied with the emotions once shared.
Only critique, spelling on the word "realise" it is realize. Otherwise beautiful.

Uor poems r always amazing..and dis one is special too..

In your first try, you're but a child. Lesson learned, saves a future blame.

In your first try, you're but a child. Lesson learned, saves a future blame.

I like your poetry, Rebecca:)

It is clear how much you feel for this guy...I believe there is one special person for everyone, but does not have to be the first one you fell in love with. In fact in know that does not have to be so! ;)

Well written, as always.

5/5 Ingrid

A lovelt heartfelt piece Rebecca!
So sad to read and I suspect it was true.
Love huh?!!!
Keep writing these sad poems, I like them a lot!