I like this poem a lot because it describes how hard it can be for people who are trying to build a life for themselves these days! Oh I can relate!

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I was just talking with someone about this earlier! That no matter how hard you really try, you still don't succeed it seems... most definitely not in this economy. :/ But it is better to try than to not try at all...at least when you look back on life you will be able to say you gave it your all.

Good, relatable write, Thomas!

I like it everyone related to this

I loved your message here very much. It is so awful being in the unemployment line. We go to universities, we study, we dream of changing the world, but eventually... we end up not working in our certificates... living this average life. Many would relate to this. AWesome job, Thomas:)

This is a great poem message wise
I really love how u stated you are holding to hope shows a lot of optimist and that is exactly what people need to stay alive and also I like that golden generation part it had something to relate to for me lol
and I think this can be a good advice to people like me haha

anyway I thank you for sharing this
really enjoyed reading '
keep on the good work =)

Each and everyday of our lives is a lesson learned the harsh way just as you portrayed

You went far with explaining that even on the darkest of hours! One will always hope for the best an at times over achieve or under achieve
And to able to see the world from such a climax can only show that you have seen ups an downs in the years that you've lived
Just like all of us! The trick of this life is to keep breathing
So make sure to keep a hold of that and one day you will be at the top of the world
Very beautifully pinned! I envy you for such rhyming skills btw! 5/5 and this was well worthy of praise friend

This is so sad you feel this way, I have felt this trapped feeling many times, the economy is so hard right now for everyone and especially people who leave school with no qualifications, they can be so talented but without the marks on paper they are usually unwilling to give you a try.

Nice write.