TJM- I'm really loving the emotions crafted within this heartfelt poem. Its truly from the heart I can see that...

I do think a good edit and correction of spelling along with format would really spruce this poem up.... if its ok, Im going to show you what I'm trying to explain.... here is an example:

I told you i loved you
but you listened to them
tell you otherwise about me.

I really meant it when i said
i was sorry, but you listened to your
Godly given sixth sense, they said you possessed.

The tears realy were for you
and so was the hurt i experienced
but they said you'd be a fool
if you fell for them.

Now here we both stand,
hatred brewing and all because of them-

You should have known...
truly i did mean it all
and when i said i was sorry...

There are many ways to format a poem, but this is just an example... I hope I was of some help and again, very powerful and heartfelt message :-)