Comments : Departure from you....

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    This one a really sad piece.
    i have been through all of t his too, dats y its so easy to feel this poem.
    sometimes we dont have d power to persuade our love not to leave.
    and we jus stand thr helpless,,,seeing dat happen..

    i loved your poem dear...thnx for sharing.

    • 11 years ago

      by Suyechha

      Thank u so much for your comment..Its sad becoz its written thinking of a girl who just can't stop her loved one as she is in many circumstances..She makes him happy without showing her sadness...