Comments : Forbidden Love

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Loved the feeling and emotion in this, works well as a rhyming acrostic.

    great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lovely acrostic, Rebecca:)

    As for the message: they never do, sweetheart. They take your all and then dump you.

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Love it Rebecca! So clever also in arranging the title in the way you did! A good piece of work!