Wow....this was...I can't say scary, or dark, but actually, just super sad. The story has probably happened, women victims of rape killing their rapist, and it just saddens me that they have to go through that..

I don't usually like rhyming poems like I've told you before but I did enjoy this! Something about your wording kept me a little intrigued throughout this whole entire piece I couldnt wait to get to the end. Very interesting write Stephen.

Wow... this piece is heartbreaking and totally sad because this is the reality of many women and girls. I appreciate the imagery and the wise word choice that in this poem.

This piece is dark because it speaks of a victim who has lost the light that made her once want to live. Excellent write...