You've out done yourself yet again. Such a delicate piece but you made it work. Great job 5/5

This deserves more than a 5/5 rating. Incredibly written, I've already read it three times. Probably my favorite one you have written so far.

Love the last line, seagulls have the freedom of oceans, land and sky.
The opening is great, I love a conflicting message.

another great write by one of the 'masters'

awesome

Wow, i love this, short but so powerful.