My gosh, this poem is wow. It's short but there's a lot to take in.

The only correction or change I see necessary for this piece is in the fourth line. "Of" should be off.

While the word "cutting" was used a ton, the word choice was still well thought. I really liked that aspect alone. However the style was nice and the flow was almost perfect. I really like the descriptions you used so effectively.

The last two lines are by far my favorite here. You have penned a wonderful piece.

4/5 - due to the replication of cutting (I know a stupid reason not to get full vote, but now that I think about it, it did get a tiny bit annoying.) Sorry!!!

Have fun writing, can't wait for your next piece.

~MRK